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For as many applicants as possible, I draft the first part of your Statement completely free of charge to promote my service. More than half of these applicants decide to commission me to finish drafting the entire statement. This is how I support myself and my only child Davy Dylan, laying a little something aside for his future. 

drrobertedinger@gmail.com

MA Education, E-learning, Brunei Darussalam

February 24, 2012

 


Candidate to study towards a graduate degree at XXXX University. Your program is my first choice for graduate study because of the alignment between the course offerings in its Master of Education program and my intellectual interests and long term professional goals. I have heard so many good things about the University of XXXX, what a beautiful place it is and how peaceful; I know several Bruneians who study there.

Currently I'm working as a tutor at the University of XXXX in the Faculty of the Academy of XXXX. I am an avid fan of the search for long term balance between teaching, on the one hand, and doing professional research on the other. I am especially interested in doing graduate work in the area of Education because, in the faculty where I am currently working as a tutor, they are now introducing a new program and I have been invited to take part. Thus, I have been given a scholarship by the Brunei government to pursue my MA Degree. Once I have completed the MA, I will automatically become a lecturer in this program. For this reason, in order to fulfill this opportunity to improve the educational system in my country, I very much look forward to completing your program and becoming an advanced, creative, and critical thinker in the field of education. I see XXXX University, first and foremost, as the best place to provide me with the foundation that I need to produce novel ideas and organizational inventions in education.

I am especially interested in e-learning. I wish to focus my studies at the thesis level on an adaptation of ICT to the organizational and material peculiarities of my country and the cultural dispositions of my people. I am currently providing tutorial assistance in Malay for students in a course on Islam and Monarchy. Upon the completion of a Master's, I would be invited to teach the course The System of Education in Brunei Darussalam. I am very interested in learning and writing about the relationship between e-learning and the system of education in Brunei.

I wish so much to attend XXXX University because I am firmly convinced that the British educational system is better than that of most other countries and I am very much in need of completing the Master's degree in one year. I have visited Britain before and I feel very comfortable there. While my native language is Malay, English is my second language and I am very comfortable studying and writing in English. In the future I would like to teach courses related to education in both languages.

The educational system in my country is in desperate need of improvement. I wish to help our educational institutions become more open to the people and provide greater chances for ordinary citizens. Additional courses need to be introduced as course offering here are very limited. Sadly, those who do not have the money to study overseas often fail to study at university at all. I look forward to building a website for my students where they can refer to lecture notes and participate in online discussions.

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