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For as many applicants as possible, I draft the first part of your Statement completely free of charge to promote my service. More than half of these applicants decide to commission me to finish drafting the entire statement. This is how I support myself and my only child Davy Dylan, laying a little something aside for his future. 

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DMD Dental School, Give a Kid a Smile Day

February 24, 2012

 


Perhaps the strongest aspect of my candidacy to your program at XXXX University is that I am very dedicated to my professional performance and also very highly motivated and determined to achieve my professional goals. I have dreamed of becoming a dentist for many years. Even as a child, perhaps especially as a child, I was well aware of the pain and dread associated with dental problems. I am so very attracted to dentistry because of the great challenge and opportunity. The chance to see my clients walking out of my practice with a big smile and a great sense of relief and confidence for me this will be sheer joy. I know I am going to get there. Generally speaking, if someone dedicates themselves entirely to their first priority in life, they meet with success. And for me this will be distinguishing myself as one of the most dedicated students in the program at XXXX's School of Dental Medicine.

While I do look forward to supporting myself, I am not materialistic; it is the quality of existence found through service to others that draws me, the privilege of alleviating pain. I see the practice of dentistry as a form of social work and I am motivated by my love for my community. I especially look forward to the precious little and half terrorized--children that will come to me for help, putting them at ease, making sure that they understand that I truly care about them. They will be able to sense that I am doing this out of profound affection and a hunger to help. I have many hours of experience shadowing dental assistants at XXXX Dental Care Centre in Granite City and I was also a volunteer for Give a Kid a Smile Day, hosted by my university. I know a great deal about dentistry tools and I am familiar with correct dentistry terminology with hands-on experience in patient care, these experiences have confirmed that dentistry is the right career choice for me. I have always worked well in a team environment and I am willing to go the extra mile to achieve my goals. I believe that I have the necessary drive and passion to excel and succeed in your program.

It is my belief that a person's smile is one of their most important assets in life and it is my passion to help every person obtain the best possible smile.  I am well aware that many, especially the neediest in society, do not have the opportunity to take care of their teeth. My central goal is to contribute to the movement to change that. I would especially appreciate the opportunity to study dental medicine at XXXX University, so that I may achieve my dream of studying at one the top dental schools in the country at the same time that I am able to stay close to home and enjoy the full support of my family. I am very conscientious and well organized, with a great sense of humor and I want nothing in life as much as I want to become a first-class, outstanding dentist. Thus, I feel that I am a strong candidate for your program.

I was born and raised in Alton, Illinois and this past May I graduated from XXXX University with a major in Biology and a minor in Chemistry. I wish to continue my studies in my home state and this is of utmost importance to me; as it is in my home town and I want to achieve my long term goal of running my own family practice here and be able to give back something of great value to my community The practice that I dream of is providing excellent dental care with fees on a sliding scale according to income. I will take special joy in treating needy minority children at no cost and developing an educational center to teach people about the importance of dental hygiene. Accumulating money and possessions have little interest for me. Rather, I live to serve and help people who need me because of the sheer joy that this gives me. I want to thank you for considering my application.

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