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Sample Personal Statement for the BSN Degree, Ethiopian

Now 24, I feel as if I have been preparing to enter a BSN program ever since I immigrated to America from my native Ethiopia five years ago. I have been very much blessed in America and given the chance to not only to be the first member of my family to ever go to college, but to do so in the USA.

I have been preparing myself for your distinguished BSN Program at the University of XXXX in many ways and for many reasons. I see the greatest strengths of XXXX and the U of X to be our great respect for and admiration if diversity and progressive causes and I see this as particularly true in the case of health care in general and nursing in particular. My job at XXXX International Airport as a Meet and Assistant has helped me to become accomplished at caring for and helping with people of all ages, especially elderly people and those who are physically challenged, from all over the world, global cultures, languages, and customs. I have learned a great deal at the airport that I am confident will help me to excel in nursing school as we continue to make great strides in our celebration of diversity in nursing.

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I help as many people as I can free of charge, by drafting a model first paragraph on their behalf. In many if not most cases, I also offer to finish the document on their behalf at this price. I am limited in how many clients I am able to assist primarily by the fact that I have half custody of my baby boy Davy, every 24 hours he is mine for 24 hours, and he does not let me work unless he is asleep. This is also why it sometimes takes me about three days to finish your statement once you have made your payment. In short, I only offer to draft complete statements for people whose story excites me, people who I feel strongly are in a unique position to give something of importance to their respective professions. And I only do my best, taking the time to reflect on your story as well, usually doing some internet research on your behalf.

I particularly enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World, where I live with my only child Davy, and the cause to which I dedicated my life.

1.) Fill Out Online Interview Form. 2.) send resume/CV & rough draft to drrobertedinger@gmail.com

An old wise man and creative writer,  I draft a model first paragraph for your Statement free of charge to promote my service:  Many of my clients Add Me as a Contact! on Skype. ID: DrRobertEdinger so that we can chat. Please note that I am not usually able to talk and I need your information in text form. I live on a mountaintop overlooking Cochabamba, Bolivia, the exact center of South America, with my only child David. We live here primarily because his mother lives down in the valley and we share custody.

I appreciate that you trust me to do a good job finishing your statement. I trust you as well to recommend me to your friends and colleagues if you are very pleased with your statement. 

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I have been drafting statements on behalf of nurses now for 15 years. Writing statements is not always fun, and the older I get the more mental and emotional energy it takes for me to do a good job. This is one of the reasons why I have developed a priority focus on nurses, writing more statements in this area than any other, because I admire the dedication of nurses, their orientation of service and giving. Nurses are generally among the finest people on the planet, on human and emotional levels, because of their ethic of service. Thus, when I help a nurse succeed, I am inspired by her/his story.

I draft several eloquent and concise statements for admission to nursing school each week; and it is something that I have come to enjoy very much, take very seriously, and have gotten especially good at doing. In fact, I have spent many years investigating what makes a Statement for admission to nursing school as effective as possible, what programs and institutions in the area of nursing are looking for in applicants: specific qualities, interests, and characteristics--all of which we will emphasize in your essay. Character is especially critical and I will paint a truly eloquent portrait of who you are. It is all in the wording and I like to think I have a natural gift for statement expression. My own special strength is in the emotional eloquence of nursing. I admit that on a few occasions, tears have welled up in my eyes while drafting a statement for nursing school; it is a most enriching experience.

Since my son Davy was born on November 5, 2011, he has become the total center of my world. This is why I get especially excited by the opportunity to draft model personal statements, letters, and essays for nurses; because of the importance of family to us all, our futures, the future of the human race, our planet.

While I live in Bolivia where Davy’s mother is a professor who teaches sustainable architecture, we went back to my home in the USA to have our baby. This way my mother got to hold my son while she was still with us. There was not a kinder more attentive medical team in the world than those who cared for the three of us, especially the nurses. My wife had an extremely difficult delivery and we were in the hospital for almost one week.

My mother, who is now suffering from acute Alzheimer's was the main reason why we went back to the United States to have our baby. Our family physician, Becky Allmon in Bedford, Indiana, and her nursing staff were for me the kindest people in the world and they will have my undying gratitude for eternity. Thus, helping nurses to get accepted to programs of advanced study is indeed a special privilege, an opportunity for me to give something back in exchange for the wonderful treatment we were given, to say thank you for my special gift, Davy Dylan Edinger.

My service is quite different from other statement writing services on the Internet for several reasons. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me. I answer all of your questions completely free of charge and I am solely responsible for producing a statement that you are very pleased with.

Please note that I attend to my clients in the order in which I have received their payments. 

I absolutely love this statement. Thank you so much.

K.S.  (Application for Family Nurse Practitioner Program, March 2011)

Dr. Robert Edinger with Son Davy Dylan

Let's get started working on your statement together, as a team, you and me. All you need to do is fill out my Online Interview Form and I will send you the first paragraph of your model statement at no charge or obligation. Many of my visitors are impressed with my ability and subsequently decide to use my service  (Testimony).

Despite the fact that I am 55, 2 years ago I had my first and only child, Davy. My wife had an extremely difficult delivery and we were in the hospital together for several days. I have never been so impressed by any social or professional group of people as I was with the nurses that cared for my wife and baby; and me too.

I am convinced that the finest people on earth are attracted to this profession and this is why it would be a special privilege for me to help you to draft a spectacular statement that will get you accepted to nursing school. Often, I am able to make important contributions to the development of your ideas, especially your long term goals and aspirations for helping the underserved, which is the single-most important part of your statement.