For as many applicants as possible, I draft the first part of your Statement completely free of charge to promote my service. More than half of these applicants decide to commission me to finish drafting the entire statement. This is how I support myself and my only child Davy Dylan, laying a little something aside for his future.

MS Masters Biology, Pre-Dental Biology

February 22, 2012

I am a young Persian woman who was born and raised in Tehran. I came to the U.S. eleven years ago at the age of fourteen. I have known deep in my heart for several years that what I most want to do professionally is become a world class dentist. I am attracted to this field because of my fascination with beauty, technology, the challenge and joy of making people smile. Yet, I am still young and I want to further my education in the science of the human body before undertaking dental school. I especially love Biology, and I hope to complete the M.S. Degree at XXXX and then go on to dental school.

I think that XXXX University is the most beautiful university of the world. For me it is a symbol of ultimate success at the height of civilization. I love everything about XXXX especially its setting. I have worked very hard in school and I want the best for myself. I am confident that taking graduate level classes at XXXX is the smartest thing that I could do for myself in preparation for a lifetime of service to my fellowman. I have had a passion for biology for many years and this is why I chose to major in biology as an undergraduate student at XXXX University in Wayne, NJ where I developed a special interest throughout the course of this program in the area of physiology and behavior. I am applying to XXXX to take classes as a non degree student. This is primarily because I have not yet taken the GRE as a result of being busy studying for the DAT and not wanting to work towards taking both examinations at the same time. It is my sincere hope to become a degree student at XXXX within a year of beginning my studies and to proudly join the ranks of XXXX alumni who go on to honor the school.

I look forward to contributing to the high level of diversity and multicultural appreciation at XXXX. I speak Turkish at home but cannot read or write it very well. Since I am Iranian, however, I do read and write Farsi as my mother tongue. I feel it is especially important for young Iranian people to have a presence in higher education in America in these times of great political turmoil between the West and the Iranian government.

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