Statements of Excellence in Religious Studies

Statement Help for Graduate Admission in Religious Studies, Divinity, Theology.

It is very important that you carefully review the style and presentation of your application material for graduate school before submitting it, especially your Personal Statement of Purpose. Seeking the assistance of a professional writer is often a very good idea, especially if English is your second or third language. I would be happy to draft the first paragraph free of charge so that I have the opportunity to demonstrate to you how I can help in this regard. You will only need to pay for my services if you are very impressed with the first paragraph and decide to commission me to draft the entire statement.

I would be happy to provide you with a highly eloquent Statement that portrays you as someone with enormous potential to contribute to the advance of the field of Religious Studies over the long term. After you fill out my Online Interview Form, I will ask you some specific questions by email if I need any further information. Please also send your resume/CV and or rough draft if you have one: 

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Sample 1st Paragraph for the MA in Religion, Indian Applicant

I hope to be accepted to your distinguished Master’s Degree Program in Religion at XXXX University because I see your program as the best fit for my interests, spanning three distinct areas of inquiry: Religion, Sociology, and Social Work. I have received a scholarship from the Indian government for my Master’s Studies in the United States because I am a competitive candidate for a professional lifetime devoted to research into the nature, patterns, and forms of progressive social change in my country, India. I plan to earn a Master’s Degree that is focused on ways that we can go about building a more just and equitable society in India as elsewhere, eventually being able to recognize the basic human rights of dispossessed and destitute populations and provide them with the  basic amenities required by human dignity.

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I help as many people as I can in the area of Religious Studies or Religion, Divinity, Theology, etc. - the field in which I earned my own Masters and doctoral degrees.

1.) Fill Out Online Interview Form.

2.) Send resume/CV & rough draft to

An old wise man and creative writer, for as many applicants as I can, I draft a model first paragraph for your Statement free of charge to promote my service. 

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I want to help you get accepted to a graduate program in Religious Studies, Divinity, or Theology

I finished my Masters Degree in Religious Studies at Indiana University in 1988 and my PHD in Religion was granted by the University of Southern California in 1995. I have spent my life studying religion and now I am an old man who helps others to achieve the profound satisfaction that I have found in life. While I help people to get accepted to graduate school in all areas, Religious Studies will always be special for me since it is the field of my own studies. I am quite familiar with world cultures and world religions and I often do research on behalf of my clients to help them make their Statement as effective as possible.

If you are in a hurry, it is advisable to proceed with your payment, since I attend to my clients, generally speaking, in the order in which I have received their payments.


My service is quite different from other statement writing services on the Internet for several reasons. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me. I answer all of your questions completely free of charge and I am solely responsible for producing a statement that you are very pleased with.

Please note that I attend to my clients in the order in which I have received their payments. 

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